so i created my own world of ocs in april of last year and started to develop them since then. First it just started with a guy with his daughter and a guy with his sister, because it was a dream. Yes, i dreamed most of the world and then i developed by myself the whole universe and all that shit, my best friend was the one that encouraged me to draw them, i'm still trying to find a name for the story if i ever write it down.
Caleb (yes, just Caleb, he's called that bc a book i read btw) it's the main protagonist (and my son) of the story (even tho i dreamed in the perspective of his little sister). His skin was originally gray, don't ask why, for a reason my mind gave him gray skin, but anyways, his skin is black, he has black curly hair, yellow eyes, and two yellow inverted triangles marks under his eyes, those marks represent the power he has, it's a power that has been passing trough his family for generations, it first started with Dorian Moldovan, an researcher and anthropologist of the ancient history of Altalune (might change the name later) and it's conection with forgoten goddesses.
That world divides in 3 regions: Eslumore, the high society; Hauburgh, the middle world; and Odonham, the underworlds (all this names could change later). But Altalune wasn't divided before, it use to be only one region called Klofmore. Klofmore was ruled under the command of the goddesses, and everyone lived in liberty. There were 6 goddesses that decided to gift the humans that worship them, i'm still thinking of what powers/habilities each goddess gave to the humanity but i have some clear, telekinesis (strenght), flying (idk how to call it) and super velocity (idk how to call it either). Those habilities always had a mark in some specific part of the body, like telekinesis that the mark is around the eyes, also the eyes turn into the color of the hability, yes, each hability has a color. After all those thousand years some powers started to mutate, the telekinesis one grew 4 arms and gray skin (it normally just affects the arms), Caleb is the generation that mutated and got the 4 arms; and the flying one got wings like angels. The way that the godesses gifted the humans was trough rituals and shrines. Those shrines were inside caves, the rituals were about entering the cave and following the whole path reading the story of the goddesses and the humans that was written on the wall until reach the shrine, where the goddesses would judge the soul of the one doing the ritual.
The goddesses only gave the powers to people who found worthy of that responsability, the ones that couldn't get those powers isolated themselves from the gifted ones and created their own society that was against the goddesses and their habilities. That society kept growing, and they made huge thecnollogy advances in their own territory. This is when Klofmore started to divide. The ungifted ones called their territory Altalune. I'm still working on how this nation developed, but after years and years of advances they started a war against the gifted ones. The goddesses witnessing the war decided to stop it all for once and took away all the habilities and powers. A lot of gifted people died during that war while the gifted people just tried to stop the war instead of killing them back. The ungifted ones took power over Klofmore and expanded Altalune. The ungifteds created their own system during those advances, which system they created? CAPITALSM. Then Altalune divided in 3, yeah, social classes. The shrines ended abandoned, forgotten and hidden. Many decades went trough, some tried to acces again to the shrine, some could, but they had to be really careful their whole life so the ungifted ones couln't find out that they were gifted and wouldn't harm them. I'm still developing all of that story, so it's kind of bad.
I think we can go back to the characters now. Caleb is technically an orphan, her mom runned away the moment she knew she was pregnant, why? because his father. He's the main antagonist of this story, i'm still trying to develop his reasons of why he's the antagonist. He is son of the second daughter of Dorian, Dorian is his grandfather. Going back to Caleb, after his mother runned away from his father she hid so he wouldn't find her. She gave birth and all that stuff, but then she saw that her newborn son had 4 arms and two marks under his eyes. She runned away because she didn't wanted to get involved in whatever her husband was doing, but her son was already involved the moment he was born like that. She abandoned them with a couple, that couple soon found out that they had to hide that child when they saw him at their door. They kept them until the government found what they were hiding. Caleb was very independant at that moment, he was 9 and the couple teached him how he could live by himself even at that young age just if the government found about him and he had to escape, thing that happened. The couple gave him a cloak so he could hide his arms and he escaped trough the forest. I haven't developed this part completely so yeah. He had to live stealing some markets of the underworld and blah blah blah. After a lot of time living like that (and an atack that he suffered from stealing) an old man found him, Caleb thought that he would harm him because he stole him some bread he just bought, instead he took him under his mantle as his protégé. He took him to live in his house, that was in the middle of the ocean (dont ask why, it was like this in the dream). After some time (like half a year or idk) the old man came with something (or more like someone), it was a baby that was recently abandoned. Caleb mainly took care of her, not because he was told to, but because he wanted to protect her like his "parents". They named her Angelina (Calebs idea), and her and Caleb grew like brothers while the old man acted like their grandparent.
I have some other characters like Apollo (his nickname, not his real name, i have to think more about that later), he acts more like a robin hood and it's also searched by the government. He sometimes helps a group that likes to be called "The lost children" (may change this name in the future), it's a group that later takes Angelina (or Angie for short) to help her find her brother (yes, they separate in the future), but Apollo mostly helps a group of gifted people that hides from everyone for their own safety. In that group is someone with the hability to fly, that mutated and got 2 big wings. Btw Apollo is gifted too, but his mark is in his forehead so he hides it with his fringe.
"The lost children" is a group that is heavily against the government, they normally steal the rich to help others in the underworlds; meanwhile the group of gifted are simply a group of refugees, with them are some families, they aren't much, even they are way more less than The Lost Children.
But anyways, it's 5 am again, i've been writing this for hours and i doubt that someone would actually read all this shit. Before i go i want to remember you something, you're important no matter how insignifficant you think you are, love ya'
And sorry for the spelling mistakes
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