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KiBLS Poetry - Light at the horizon

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Title: Light at the horizon

Light at the horizon

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Zigzag Buster 🇺🇦

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This poem reads like a call to fight for what you believe in. Kudos!


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Hm, I would say it's not a real fight if you stand for the true. And whether you drag the lies into the light and expose them or highlight them with the truth is a matter of interpretation but even this i would not title as a fight. But the darker our world becomes, the easier it will be for many people to recognize the primal light, you could say. But the poem is not really a call to fight. Rather a call for the own inner change for self-knowledge in dark times that are slowly changing. But thanks for your interesting comment and support! And enjoy your day/evening :)

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Hmm, I never thought of it that way before. Anyway, thanks for the poem!

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You're welcome :)

Well, fighting on the outside is pointless. If you fight an eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth, we'll all end up blind and toothless. The real battle is against our own ego, so to speak. And of course while the world is really fighting on the outside, which is very pointless and will only lead to more suffering. Often far into the next generations.

Anyway, hava a great day/evening and best regards from Germany :)

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tobi

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I love it how always sir !! ^__^


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I'm very happy to hear from you again. Thanks as always for your feedback and support and have a great day/evening :)

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Have a good day/evening too !!

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