You said we needed to talk
I stare at your,
Emotional face
Talking and talking:
About how I
Supposedly betrayed you, lied to you, played with you—
Yet I stay quiet
I suggest:
That, perhaps, you're mistaken
In reaction
You get more angry, you scream, swear, judge—
Yet I still listen
Abruptly, you go quiet
Abruptly, you pull out
A knife
You stab it, towards my chest
I could have dodged it, pushed, punched—
Yet I still let you
It sinked in, she pulled it out
She tried to stab me again, I grab her hand
I grab the knife
I stab her in the chest
Blood comes out
Of my mouth
I pull the knife out, it falls
You fall, I fall
You stare at me, crying, coughing—
It's getting hard to breathe, to think, to talk—
The floor feels warm
Tired, your gaze
Remenbers me, waking up by your side
I stare at you, who tried... to kill me, who I tried... to kill—
I cough, choking on my blood—
Yet I still love you—
Yet I still.
Love you (TW)
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jPod_JiXon
I liked it! The only error I saw was at the end where "breath" should have an e at the end. Good work though!!
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thank you!
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