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Love you (TW)

You said we needed to talk
I stare at your,
Emotional face

Talking and talking:
About how I
Supposedly betrayed you, lied to you, played with you
Yet I stay quiet

I suggest:
That, perhaps, you're mistaken
In reaction
You get more angry, you scream, swear, judge—
Yet I still listen

Abruptly, you go quiet
Abruptly, you pull out
A knife
You stab it, towards my chest
I could have dodged it, pushed, punched—
Yet I still let you

It sinked in, she pulled it out
She tried to stab me again, I grab her hand
I grab the knife
I stab her in the chest
Blood comes out
Of my mouth

I pull the knife out, it falls
You fall, I fall
You stare at me, crying, coughing—

It's getting hard to breathe, to think, to talk—
The floor feels warm
Tired, your gaze
Remenbers me, waking up by your side

I stare at you, who tried... to kill me, who I tried... to kill—

I cough, choking on my blood—
Yet I still love you—
Yet I still.


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jPod_JiXon

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I liked it! The only error I saw was at the end where "breath" should have an e at the end. Good work though!!


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thank you!

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feedback, pointing out mistakes, opnions, are appreciated


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