“I am a real kitty” new story I wrote

SCENE 1 NIGHT TIME AT THE GARBAGE CANS

A lone black cat (Saki) is seen sitting near a garbage can during night time. She is seen there resting quietly. She rested the whole night without any interruptions.

SCENE 2 DAY TIME AT THE GARBAGE CANS

Saki suddenly turns into a half cat and half human form. She is used to this by now sometimes she transforms without noticing or even in her sleep such as this. She has only a dirty t shirt and shorts on. She is seen curled up and lying in front of the trash cans. Her tail and ears are visible now. Her appearance looks like that of a young girl, however she can turn into any age she wants.

SCENE 3 DAY TIME “STRANGE OCCURENCE”

She is still resting quietly before a stranger comes over and asks if she needs help. “Hey, kid are u ok? Do u need some help?” Saki rubbed her eyes as her vision finally became unblurred. There stood a slender pale man, it had black floppy hair that covered his eyes just slightly. His eyes appeared to be a darkish red color, like a dark copper. Saki was not used to people talking to her so she suddenly cried as if this was some familiar occurence. 

SCENE 4 AFTERNOON “A STRANGERS HOME”

The stranger then picked her up as he carried her over to his house not too far away. Saki again fell asleep due to her weak state from not eating for a while. The strange man sat her down on a step from his stairs. His home appeared old fashioned, the stairs were a dark oak wood with a red patterned rug on them. His house smelled very new, as if all the furniture was polished. The man returned with a roast beef sandwhich for her to eat, she was even too weak to take the sandwhich. So the man fed her “open wide, ahhhh” he said with a soft voice. “I forgot to introduce myself, my name is Kunare, but u may call me Kun. What is your name?” He asked politely. 

Note: this is work in progress this is by no means the final draft of these scenes.

More coming soon. Pls Lmk what u think or what should be changed