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It's a work in progress (AKA not finished) but I like it so far.
Be nice, but feel free to comment any suggestions or comments.
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Erasable, by Tyler James
I don't get people
Let’s go run
Feel the wind against my face
Before i come undone
Take my hand on this chase
Let me teach you all the ways
I love to erase
The fact that I'm human
The fact I cant cry
Cant, you tell I'm a little crazy
You're dating someone from the outside
No, I know your gonna leave me
No don't say you'll stay even if you do
I’ll self destruct in a day
Cause I'm just erasable
So give me time to write the ways I lay my face on the road
Because I love the rush
As much as I love your touch
And as much as I hate your guts
The breeze whistling in my ears
Makes me forget the fact I don't trust your smile in the moonlight
And the way you forget my texts
Either way, I'd jump off this cliff with the cords attach
Whether they break or we learn to fly
I’d die following you
Crushing my chest
So you'll finally see the difference between them and me
So give me the time to love your touch
And hate your guts
Before i self destruct
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Gible
i can hear the rhythm in my head reading this. i dig it dawg keep it up
JamesNotGiant
I see it fitting that like 200s indie skate vibe. Love It. Can I add you to see when you write more.
thank you! ,yeah ofc!!
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Tate_
This is so sick wtf
Release when?/j
lol, I don't know if I'm gonna get around to recording it, but I would love to. I've been writing more lately, so I'm hoping to release at least something soon. If you're interested some of my other lyrics/poetry are on my page (we're gonna pretend that wasn't a shameless self promo)
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Extended Blundering
SICK! idk what type of music you hope to be a part of but I'm looking for vocals on tracks. If THIS type is something you could work with get at me!
I take a lot of inspiration from rock and indie music! Some bands I admire are listed on my profile, glad you liked what I've been writing. I'm working on some lyrics now and can't wait to share them here!
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You've definitely got a poetic sense, do you find it difficult to place to music? That is typically where I fall short myself
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I tend to struggle in deciding what kind of song my lyrics should be. Something Acoustic? Metal? Rock Ballad? Slow bedroom pop vibes? There are so many possibilities and options when all you have are the lyrics!!
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Very true indeed! Well good luck, keep creating my friend
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Thank you! And to you as well!
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╰☆☆Fish_Stick☆☆╮
That sounds so good I love it :D
Thanks!! :)
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The_bugz_system
HOLLLLYYYYY CCRAPPPPPP thats sooooo cooooollllll
Thank you so much!!!
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its really good!!! I write music but now like that:O
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yeah i just sat down one day and wrote it
its slightly different than some things ive done in the past but thats one of the reasons i like it. i dont know how well it comes across, but its raw, and it tells this story
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its great, it gives a sense of freedom and "I'll tell you whats wrong with me, before I let you love me"
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what you just said
that
thats good
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ty :)
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