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I feel euphoric Relieved even Experiencing this feeling after so long After being starved from this feeling I feel like a flower One that knows not how the sun feels on it’s petals But how it feels to wilt and wither I've always loved the smell of petrichor But you can't have petrichor with no light No brightness No heat No sun Sitting in a corner Staring through the window Watching as a ray of sunshine fills the room Until a cloud drifts into view and ruins the moment My euphoric moment My moment of euphoria Obtaining something you’ve longed for is an amazing feeling But having it ripped away from you is the worst So naturally, you’re protective of it No matter how protective How careful How gentle It’s always ripped away But once again I’ve gotten my salvation of light It’s like no other I do hope and pray That this ray lasts No rain No clouds Just light.
Just Light
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𝕺𝖑𝖎𝖛𝖊𝖗
The way you write is amazing, and shows passion and meaning I do have a request:
1. Write more
2. The poem is about being happy in the beginning and having someone (your Dad) take that away from you and still have some light or hope (Your closet friend Arden) or just some silver lining to believe in. Add more details, when you explained the true meaning of the poem I re-read it and everything unfolded and everything all formed into one and it all hit deeper on a bigger level, in other words, it had a Bigger Impact. So add more details not all poems need to be small.
(1 I meant like write more poems I love them)
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