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docile and doll faced,
upturned canyons are tucked away amongst pearl strung canines
pressing against the cherubic plush before bruises blossom in blue,
an embryonic spring seeps into winter's frostbite...
swallow down your estuary aches
until it peels back translucent truths that expose the rubies in your crowns.
before and after meet to dissertate the present;
slaughtering deceased equestrians, redundant in their rocking chairs
appraising paperweight promises, soon to depart in origami
which shapeshift into dishonesty that absconds on weather's breath,
earning a tighter pull on overcoat zippers with clenched jaws,
seeking shelter from passing cold shoulders.
insufflated parliament dietaries
tip ash onto the asphalt
each curling ember a token of cogitated excuses.
i dream in grey scale so absence fades into obscurity;
on the horizon of REM, make me soignΓ© in black appareling,
and forbid me not to clash amidstΒ the numbered lambs.
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DIJA
TEN OUTTA TENNN adore this so much!
zoya
"an embryonic spring seeps into winter's frostbite", oh this is gorgeous omg. you have such a unique, beautiful way of writing
Thank you so much!! That means a lot <3
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Steve
My favorite part is
"upturned canyons are tucked away amongst pearl strung canines
pressing against the cherubic plush before bruises blossom in blue,"
Thank you so much :) I'm quite proud of it too
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Meward Gay
I love this, especially the line "seeking shelter from passing cold shoulders". Idk why but this line really sticks out to me, it has such a nice light blue colour that really makes sure you see it.
THANK YOU MEWARD GAY!!!
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yr so welcome
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leo
oh this is amazing
Thank U Leo!!!
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Angel
thank you for your poem, you have a special way of writing and sharing emotions I LOVE IT <33
AHH thank you so so much I'm glad you like it and that it resonates with you π
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Energy mind Poem. Thanks
π¦Ήβ.Λ Jazzie +
And They Said Shakespeare Was Dead [-_-]
NEVER STOP WRITING UGH I LOVE YOUR POEMS
GOD YOU FLATTER ME THANK YOU SO MUCH
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Tevi
It's a really pretty poem. You can just feel you put your heart out in it (β ｑβ β’Μβ α΄β -β )β β§
I am really glad you felt that energy within my writing, thank you so much for telling me (β Β β ββ βΏβ ββ Β β )β β‘
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afroaza
LAUREN. i ran out of compliments so wait for me because ingerland isn't far
IM BREWING THE KETTLE AS WE SPEAK X
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fob
laurenspeare, this is so good.
blushing and kicking my feet <33
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aerith
This is beautiful
thank u so much!! <333
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