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i wanna write a novel but like i rewrote the first page like 298239389348 times and it got super annoying soooo

the storylien goes like this

storyline is set in 1923 around february in yamaguchi, japan : a depressed 19 yr old ( torao ) thinks to himself "im so useless i need to do something" and then he goes and gets a job as a train conductor's assistant but then after hes like "aw shucks this is making me feel like a slave but i need something to do beause all i do at home is do nothig but write and sleep" so he keeps working at the job and then comes across a rude passenger and they keep encountering eachother and one day the passenger ( heungmin ) spills a drink on torao and gets super mad and when they get to the next stop torao gets mad or whatever and then shouts at the dude but like later on in the story they become friends because of some dinner they had to go to.. and then they met this other girl chitose and befriend her too anwyays, torao thought he was getting better mentally but heungmin had to ruin that and they both got into a really toxic relationship and then during that time torao was like a really mean and grumpy person to literally anybody because well the reltionshoip was dookie poops and so he had a half brother ( ryuhei ) who was younger and looked up to torao, so of course when torao got angry at him for no reason one day and ryuhei started to hate him alot and so chitose found out when torao was venting and took advantage of it and managed to convince ryuhei that she saw how much he hated his brother and just wanted to help get back at him... sooooo chitose had a plan to end torao ( the reason was because / mention of earlier / torao had told chitose and her only about the books he wrote and showed wthem to her and she was thinking like "these could get me good moneY" and thought that it would be easier for her to steal them and success off of them when torao was dead so nobody could expose her for it. AND THEN FINALLY AT THE END torao and heungmin get into a huge argument and heungmin left to go another city temporarily ( because he was a sales adveritser ) and WHILE he was gone ( i forgot to mention throughout the story torao's vision worstened over time and at thr very end he was comepletely blind, ITS GONNA BE RELEVANT SOON I PRMISE ) chitose found out about it and sent ryuhei to m@rder torao and succeded. torao's mom hadn't seen her son in a while ad then was the first to see his corpse and she reported it yada yada, ryuhei was charged for the crime BUT he never confessed that it was chitose because chitose had threatened him that if he told the cops she would find something to accuse him of and THEEN. huengmin found out, he was obviosuly devistated and went to sleep that night, AND IN THTA NIGHT torao showed up in his dreams and forgave him for the murder beause since he was blind, he didnt know who had murdered him and assumed heungmin had killed him because of the argument BUT it wasnt him and heungmin had to tell him that it was ryuhei who actually killed him. thats basically it and chitose ended up succeeding off of torao's manuscripts..

anyways that sounds super confusing but when its all in order i PROMISE its alot more simpler