SHORT FILM CONTEST (looking for constructive criticism)

I'm entering into a short film contest being held by a musician called Shakey Graves. I made some storyboards for my script to better show my friends what I am going for, but I feel what I have produced may be lackluster. The contest instructs us to use the generated prompt from his website to make a trailer, scene, or short film. So, I elected to make a scene out of the synopsis provided. Below is the synopsis and storyboards to go with it. If you have any constructive criticism, please tell me! 


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Whorey

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This is pretty good but my friend an I were wondering what the theme of the contest was?


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It depends. You have to go to Shakey Graves' website and type something into a movie generator and it'll give you a prompt and a soundtrack, and you have to work with what the website gives you. I got the movie "Never Learned to Write". You can make a trailer, scene, or the whole movie (if you're crazy lol). I storyboarded the scene.

by Jonathan Ray; ; Report

Whorey

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This is pretty good but my friend an I were wondering what the theme of the contest was?


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It depends. You have to go to Shakey Graves' website and type something into a movie generator and it'll give you a prompt and a soundtrack, and you have to work with what the website gives you. I got the movie "Never Learned to Write". You can make a trailer, scene, or the whole movie (if you're crazy lol). I storyboarded the scene.

by Jonathan Ray; ; Report

Whorey

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This is pretty good but my friend an I were wondering what the theme of the contest was?


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It depends. You have to go to Shakey Graves' website and type something into a movie generator and it'll give you a prompt and a soundtrack, and you have to work with what the website gives you. I got the movie "Never Learned to Write". You can make a trailer, scene, or the whole movie (if you're crazy lol). I storyboarded the scene.

by Jonathan Ray; ; Report