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This poem contains sensitive themes for some readers: murder, gore.
If you don't feel comfortable, leave.
We both love each other, respect each other and care for each other. I remember falling in love with your dark eyes and your sad expression. I promised that I would never leave you for anyone else, that I would never fail you and that I would never leave you.
But I met someone else. This new person was fun, kind, and quite attractive. I couldn't control myself, I can't blame her. Little by little, feelings grew. This new human in my life captivated me.
This new being of flesh and blood caused what you one day did to me.
By the time I realized what I was doing, it was too late. This new person was getting closer than I wanted and I was allowing it.
Then I remember the promise I made you. I couldn't fail you.
I made a decision.
Invited this person to my home, we watched a movie together and before our lips touched, I pulled out a knife and stabbed her in the neck. Her skin and school uniform were bathed in crimson red. I pulled out the knife embedded in her neck and her blood splashed on my face.
I cut the body into pieces and threw them into the river under the bridge. The aquatic fauna would be responsible for erasing her existence from my mind and from this world.
I promised you, I will never leave you. I will never fail you. If I fall in love with someone else I will simply end their existence to forget them. Then I'm going to turn my attention back to you.
I love you.
By Adrián Gael
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Kyra
I love this poet. (Im not edgy or anything) I really admire this one, maybe you should make more \^0^/
🦴jizzl ★ 🍉(coquette master)🎎 🎀
what
everyoneknowsthat
love is so sick horrible thing that keeps horrible creatures like us alive
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I love this it's so good
I deleted my comment but oh my Cally you are getting BLOCKED.
by 🦴jizzl ★ 🍉(coquette master)🎎 🎀; ; Report
WHAT NO PLEASE NOOO
by ₊✰🪦🕷️Cally🎀🐾✰₊(WIP PROFILE); ; Report
hehe jokes
by 🦴jizzl ★ 🍉(coquette master)🎎 🎀; ; Report
Not funny I was scared
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i
︎ edgy poems
Izzy!
faria super :3
_Corpseater99
HOW CUTEE :((((((((((((
Криxikk
ааа какже красиво написано, эта романтика, как же прекрасно!!(☆▽☆)
Хотелось бы больше такого
by Криxikk; ; Report
Bloop :3
Edgy /pos
lol
by Danny _and a half_; ; Report
Ell1ot丰
This poem is so beautiful and romantic!
I love the one's that really makes you feel something and that you can somehow relate to...
(I ofc don't mean that i kill people lol)
Hamnnaton
Generic.
broz juzt spacehey's biggest hater XD
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Gummy
the best kind of edgy
-w-
looking forward to reading more of your writings!
John Horne
how edgy.
Thanks ;>
by Adrax; ; Report
azur3
OMG I loved this is so beatiful and deep
THX <3
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Poligna
The last romantic. (♡ω♡ )
<3
by Adrax; ; Report
🎀Syrup!!(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)
cute/hj/idksrs
Thanks.
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xx.Silver.Vampy.xx
i love your writing style! do you publish you work antwhere else?
Thank you. And no, I'm starting to write and I'm just posting it here <:
by Adrax; ; Report
Arahabaki
Bro, you write beautifully
I loved the way you narrated the poem.
＜（＾－＾）＞
Thank you.
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LuckyLukesther!
Ohh I really loved the poem :DD it's kinda scary but I still loved it
Thank you.
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ℰ𝒹𝓌𝒶𝓇𝒹 𝒞𝓊𝓁𝓁ℯ𝓃
put this guy on an fbi watchlist oh my god
lmao, sorry
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